On track to 50k!

I was out of town this weekend so I didn’t get a chance to pop over here with an update. I flew up to Ohio for a few days and I was worried that I wasn’t going to get even close to the required word count. Let me tell you, plane rides are amazing times to get work done apparently. I got so far ahead that I could take a day off and enjoy the city and have plenty of time. It’s now day 6 and I’m at word 10,043!

Writing in first person is as hard as I thought it would be. I feel like I type “I ask” and “I say” wayyyy too much, but I have to remind myself the point is to get the words out, and the story onto the page for now.

Biggest struggle: I can’t decide on a time period. It doesn’t feel modern day to me so I’ve stayed as far away from tech as I can so far. No cars, phones, etc. until I can pin it down. This is the problem with 100% pantsing it. I feel like I’m just rambling without direction yet. Lots of talking but not much happening if you know what I mean.

 

No NaNoWriMo and Oct theme reading!

NaNoWriMo is just around the corner and I’ve been debating over and over whether I am going to participate this year. The more I think about it, the more I think I’m not going to.  I need to focus on what I’ve already written and finish it once and for all and get it submitted somewhere. I haven’t figured out where I want to submit yet, but starting something else doesn’t make sense when I already have 1 finished, 1 half way and a 3rd about 3/4 done. I think I’ll use November to really fine tune the finished manuscript and my Christmas present to myself will be hiring an actual editor for the final touches. Stay tuned to see if that actually happens ….

I’ve been a bit under the weather for weeks, so that means reading, reading, and more reading! I have never attempted a theme reading month (surprising, I know!) so I thought I’d give it a shot for October and read only fantasy/mystery themed stories. I started out with a cozy mystery Witch P.I. series by Adele Abbott. It’s a cute story about a woman who was adopted only to finally meet her birth mother on her deathbed. Oh yeah, and birth momma has some news “you’re a witch”. Enter a whole new side of the family and The Dark One that wants her dead. No biggie. Each one only took about 3hrs to read so I polished them off in an evening. I figured with 21 in the series, it would last me a while. I got to book 14 and the time jump and just needed a break so I switched over to A Darker Shade of Magic by V.E. Schwab . It didn’t grab me enough to finish the series so I went in search of something else.

Again Book Riot filled my TBR list and I searched out Shades and Milk and Honey by Mary Robinette Kowal. I knew that name sounded familiar and then it finally clicked! She’s one of the cohosts for a favorite podcast of mine: Writing Excuses. It was promoted as “Jane Austen if she wrote fantasy” and that is totally in my wheelhouse. Well, it sounded like it would be. I suppose it had the makings of a Pride and Prejudice retelling but if just fell kind of flat for me.

Finally, I landed on the The Ministry of Curiosities series by C.J. Archer. I knew this format felt familiar only to realize she also wrote the Glass & Steele series that I really liked. It’s a good thing I liked that series because I’m not joking. This format is exactly the same as G&S with different characters. There were several times I laughed out loud during the first 8 books in this series. As a whole, I think I actually like this one better than G&S. Book 9 comes out Dec 5 and I can’t wait!

Speaking of release dates, The Delphi Resistance by Rysa Walker (Book 2) comes out  Tuesday! I loved her Chronos Series and this new Delphi trilogy is good so far. 17yr old Anna Morgan has a unique ability: ghosts like to catch a ride when she’s near. These mental hitchhikers won’t let go until she helps them take care of what they need to finish before they pass on. At least she gets to retain their knowledge and special skills, so there’s that. Happy early Birthday to me!

Last but not least I just finished up A Conspiracy in Belgravia (Lady Sherlock #2) by Sherry Thomas. I think Thomas does a good job emulating Sherlock’s investigating skills and there are some interesting choices here how she feminizes Sherlock, but I can’t decide if I like her or not. Charlotte Holmes I mean. I need someone to read this so I can discuss it with them, because I guess the choices make sense for the time period but I can’t put my finger on what irks me about her.

Summer reads and hitting 500 books!

I have finally hit the 500 mark AND met my 2017 Goodreads Challenge goal. As of last week, I have now read (will officially tracked as Read) 500 books in my life. Obviously there were tons of children’s books I don’t account for, and I’m sure I’ve forgotten a few over the years, but there is something intensely satisfying to see the proof of such a milestone. With my recent resurgence of love for audiobooks (it comes in waves), I have also managed to hit the goal of 55 on the year and am actually at 59. How you ask? Audiobooks and keeping a very, very disorganized house. Seriously y’all. No one can come to my house but darn’it if I’m not well read! I love physical books but I always have something on my kindle app I can sneak on elevators or long waits in line. Without further ado, here’s what I’ve been reading of note:

Eleanor & Park by Rainbow Rowell

If you want a book with ALL the feels, this is for you. It’s a story of an unlikely friendship and an an even more unlikely love between teenagers from different worlds. Eleanor’s mom married an abusive drunk of a man so she could provide a semblance of a life for her many children after their dad left. There is never enough money, they live in constant fear, and Eleanor has been kicked out once already. Park is from a wealthy family whose parents love and dote on him. Thrown together by chance on a bus, their fates twist together as they try to navigate first love, life, and heartache. There is a lot of cursing and sexual language so FYI if you’re thinking of it for a  younger reader. This is just a really touching story of love, hope, and perseverance. When I finished this book, I wanted to just hug it to my chest. I highly recommend it!

A Tale for the Time Being by Ruth Ozeki

This was one of the Book Babes choices for summer reading but I would not add this to your beach read list if you’re looking to stay happy & light. Overall, Ozeki is a wonderful story teller and I don’t exaggerate to say you have to really invest in these characters. Trigger Warning though, there are very heavy themes of depression, suicide, sexual assault, and extreme bullying. There are 2 main characters: Ruth, a modern author who discovered a diary on the beach in what is expected to be the beginnings of belongings washing in from a Tsunami, and Nao the 16ish year old diary author. Nao’s family were living in CA when she was a young child until the dot.com bubble burst, her father lost his job, and they were forced to move back to Japan. She struggles with not belonging, her father’s depression and many suicide attempts, and understanding her great grandmother who is a nun with quite the history. I do not think I can say I enjoyed this book necessarily because there were many times I had to stop reading to take breathe and get out from under the oppression for a few minutes. The best way I thought to describe it was, when I was done I felt like I had read something. Something of substance or importance maybe, but not something tossed aside. I wish she had stopped short of the explanation of how it all worked though. Once we got into quantum physics and Schrodinger’s cat, I glazed over and she lost me. The look into the Japanese culture is worth it if you’re willing to dig in but it’s not for the faint of heart.

When Dimple Met Rishi by Sandhya Menon

I heard about this one on a favorite podcast of mine “Get Booked”, Book Riot’s customized book recommendation show and “All the Books!”, Book Riot’s new release podcast and thought it sounded simply fun. Dimple and Rishi are both graduating high school and have Indian parents who want to arrange their marriage. Dimple balks at this idea because all she wants is a career and a life of her own, not to be bogged down by a constricting marriage. Her parents suddenly agree to let her go to a computer app coding camp over the summer with little explanation and she is thrilled. Unbeknownst to her, it’s because they’ve found her a potential husband who is also going. Enter Rishi who is an amazing artist but very traditional and set for an engineering degree from MIT. He is on board with the marriage idea and is willing to meet her and give it a shot. He thinks she knows and agrees. His first words to her are are a playful “Hello, future wife. I can’t wait to get started on the rest of our lives.” She throws a drink in his face and runs. It only gets better from there. This story is so cute as they get to know each other and push one another to go after their dreams. Maybe they’ll fall in love in the process? This is a MUST for your beach reading list! Super enjoyable, quick read for the summer time!

Camino Island by John Grisham

Then there was Camino Island. It’s a story about a book heist, a book seller, and an author recruited as a spy. Sounds great right? It’s Grisham so surely there’s action and great storytelling. It delivers to some degree. The original manuscripts of F. Scott Fitzgerald have been stolen from Princeton. The main suspect is a book seller on an island with a penchant for having a roving eye. A young author is out of a job and happens to have a cottage on the island so an insurance company wants her to go spy on the bookseller because she’s pretty. It basically works until it abruptly ends. All wrapped up and over and I had to check to make sure I wasn’t listening to the abridged version. There’s just not much there. It felt like he was contractually obligated to write a book and he did the minimum to get one out. That being said it isn’t a bad read, I just found it unsatisfying. Then again, I’m not a huge fan of Grisham endings in general. I know, blasphemy. So overall, this isn’t a bad read, it’s just okay.

 

 

When “harry” met “sally”

So I haven’t finished any books yet to leave you with my brilliant reflection. I am almost done with the book club selection of As You Wish (Inconceivable Tales of the Making of The Princess Bride) by Cary Elwes with Joe Layden. I have always loved The Princess Bride so I am thoroughly enjoying the anecdotes about the actors during filming.

So. To tide you over, I thought I’d give you a bit of writing to nibble on. My brother makes fun of me for being so ADD in my writing because I’m always moving around between projects instead of focusing on one to finish. To be fair I did finish one draft that he is now reading to point out room for improvement that was a 2012 NaNoWriMo contribution. You’ve heard all about the 2016 NaNo project, but I still have a bit from 2015. I didn’t get very far with it at all but I have felt compelled to revisit it lately.  I do like the characters so I thought I’d introduce you to them a little. Here is a scene where our protagonist meets whom she believes to be her antagonist. (Yes, I see the pattern in my characters. You go with what works for you.) Read more

Thanks Croup ..

If you watched the Panthers game last night and didn’t tear up or hold your breath when you saw the shear look of fear and heartbreak on Luke Kuechly’s face, you just have no heart. I can’t even look at the pictures of it today without feeling brokenhearted for him. Thankfully it’s only a concussion and he’ll be ok but that’s 2 in 2 yrs which I’m sure you know not good. He just seems like such a genuinely good kid and has such a bright future. I would hate to see it get cut short. So, Keep Pounding #59! The game wasn’t over until almost midnight (ugh. that kind of cardiac palpitation inducing event does not need to be a night game on a school night guys. You’re killing me smalls. Ok, fine, yes, I know I can be a bit intense.) So I get in bed about 12:23am finally only to hear a door open at 3.30am and little dude is wide awake and coughing. Thank you croup, I sooo appreciate that. He finally went back down for good at about 4:30a but I had to be up at 5:30a. Needless to say, I felt like a total zombie today. I had a red-eye coffee from Port City Java (coffee with 2 shots of espresso) and still struggled to keep my eyes open.

One thing that did help was finishing an audio book while I filled in some contract drafts. As long as I don’t have to figure out a story (like a mystery), then I can listen to it and still focus on something else. Overall I liked the story and smiled a lot towards the end because it’s a British chic-lit after all (my favorite guilty pleasure but let’s point something else out about why I don’t review books b/c people basically suck. I used the term Brit-Lit once meaning books by British authors set in the UK, which I LOVE, but apparently that was offensive because ‘why wasn’t it just lit? ugh Americans’  *eye roll* like I said before, too much trouble), but there is a character that I want to punch in the face during 3/4 of the book. I think she wouldn’t be nearly as shrill and obnoxious if I was reading it instead of listening to it because I wouldn’t have the actual shrieking in my ears. I may have scoffed out loud once by mistake. This is a debate I have, audio vs. actual. There are pros and cons to both. Audio is slower obviously but I can listen and multitask which is incredibly helpful when you set a ridiculously high goal for your Goodreads reading challenge. (I’m on 44 of 60 for the year. Didn’t we talk about arbitrary goal setting when we started this crazy train? I did warn you.)

Thankfully I had reached a part in my story where I am particular attached to a scene and I was able to transfer it from the original draft and spend some time reworking and expanding that. That’s why today’s stats look far more impressive than they actually are. Do not believe everything you read on the internet.

“There are two kinds of statistics, the kind you look up and the kind you make up” -Rex Stout

Your Average Per Day
1,731
Words Written Today
2,641
Total Words Written
31,174
Words Remaining
18,826
Current Day
18
Days Remaining
13
At This Rate You Will Finish On
November 29, 2016
Words Per Day To Finish On Time
1,449

 

Livin’ on a prayer

Woah! We’re halfway there. You can’t tell me that you can say halfway there without inwardly singing Bon Jovi. Ok so we’re over halfway now. I have been writing. Promise. Problem is little dude has been sick and I’ve had meetings to run so I managed to eke out enough words to keep on track, but I have fallen asleep before updating here.  So here we are, days 15 and 16. I’ll admit that last night is not my best work ever but the word count is there. So there’s that. Let’s get to the matter at hand: the story preview. I was going to use a bit towards the middle, a scene I particularly like, but apparently some people weren’t keen on that idea. Apparently it’s better to start with the beginning scene to figure out who the character is before we jump into the middle. Well, I hate to break it to you, joke’s on you buddy, it’s still a mystery. (disregard any needed edits at this stage, writing is the key remember? revise later)
Chapter One
“She could hear feet shuffling nearby and instinctively gathered her knees into her chest. Something wasn’t right. Even the smells were all wrong. The hairs on her arms were standing at attention and it was taking every ounce of strength she had to open her eyes. There was a roaring in her ears and when she finally forced her eyelids open there was only darkness. No, not quite darkness. There was something on the edges, fighting its way into her field of vision. It was as if a mist in front of her was slowly dissipating and she could almost make out figures moving past her. Pain started in her forehead, and soon she had to let go of her knees and press on her temples in a feeble attempt to combat the pressure. Noises began assaulting her ears and it was all she could do not to cry out and draw attention to herself. Panic began to rise in her chest. She strained to look through the fog, desperate to get her bearings on where she was and terrified of what that answer might be.

For weeks she had been having strange dreams. There were sounds she couldn’t identify and feelings of total detachment from herself as she floated above streets she didn’t recognize. She would be walking home from school and suddenly her ears would ring and her vision would blur for a split second. Sometimes she could swear she heard someone call her name, but this was different. This didn’t feel like a dream. It was more than a phantom calling. Squinting now into the light, she could see that she was in an alleyway but none that she had ever seen. The road beneath her feet was some kind of stone, not the pavement to which she was accustomed. Looking up, she saw a sign swinging in the wind. I’m dreaming, she thought as she pinched her upper arm in an attempt to wake up and stop the ache in her head. As she looked around again, she realized the roaring had stopped and now there was silence. The street was empty but the sign swung back and forth as if someone was gently pushing it to and fro. Its wood was battered from years of being out in the weather. The paint was badly faded, but the symbol was clear: an eagle clutching a book in its claws.

“You’ve finally arrived,” a voice broke through the silence, sending her into total terror. She scrambled to her feet, spinning around and stumbling away from the disembodied voice. As her eyes finally adjusted, she saw him standing behind where she had been crouching, picking up a book that lay on the ground and dusting off the cover.

“If you’ve quite finished with the transition, we’ve work to do,” he said as he brushed passed her with a flourish of his robe. The weathered red door swung open under the sign as he approached it, leaving her standing alone. Every cell in her body was on high alert, adrenaline coursing through her veins.

“You’ll never get anywhere standing in the middle of the street Thea,” he called over his shoulder and ducked through the door.

“Wait, how do you know my name” she managed to squeak out but he was already gone. The door swung shut before everything was black again.”

Stats from yesterday: 
Your Average Per Day
1,682
Words Written Today
1,537
Total Words Written
26,926
Words Remaining
23,074
Current Day
16
Days Remaining
15
At This Rate You Will Finish On
November 30, 2016
Words Per Day To Finish On Time
1,539

7 days! We made it!

Well dear readers, we’ve made it. A full week. 7 whole days of writing, brainstorming, fretting and progress. 1 down. 3 to go. We can do this. I know we can. Way to go you for sticking with me thus far! One of these days I will finish before midnight and get to bed on time but today is not that day. I made the mistake of trying on clothes and immediately came home to work out. Trying on clothes may be a fate worse than death. At least getting the blood pumping helped me to stay awake and bust out a couple of scenes. That being said, nothing new to report today. I’m super bummed The Crown started at exactly the worst time so I have to wait to watch it until December. At least I know what happens 😉

Wins: being productive and getting a workout and writing in!

Struggles: You’re not supposed to go back and edit during NaNo. I know, I know. BUT I didn’t like it so I scrapped a whole and scene and redid it to move from morning to night. It just made more sense. So there! Words written today is misleading. About 100 were straight copy and paste from the original draft of a scene because it was my favorite of the whole thing. I refuse to part with it. I still went line by line and “touched” every word so close enough. I do what I want.

Your Average Per Day
1,953
Words Written Today
2,823
Total Words Written
13,676
Words Remaining
36,324
Current Day
7
Days Remaining
24
At This Rate You Will Finish On
November 26, 2016
Words Per Day To Finish On Time
1,514

Liar, Liar, Wordcount on fire

It’s been quite the productive Saturday. Early morning soccer (only 1 more to go thank goodness) and then over to a fundraiser for the local raptor center. They had eagles and super cool owls. One of the screech owls was the size of my hand and literally purred when she was petted. I need one. Ok, maybe not but it was still really cool. Bought a couple of hand poured soaps to try out and then came home and promptly fell asleep sitting up on the couch while the kids watched The Lion King. I know, you’re jealous. Needless to say, my writing didn’t get started until much later in the day but at least I got there! (let’s ignore the 2nd half of the LSU v. Bama game. Gut wrenching for LSU. So close. Not that I was watching or anything. I was totally writing. What? shut up. No one asked you.)

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I thought I hit the wordcount with a handful to spare. I diligently put it into the NaNoWriMo wordcount tracker when I noticed they have a link now to officially validate your word count. I thought, why not? So I did and turns out that OneDrive is a lying liar face. See, I’ve been writing in OneDrive on the online Word application so that it is save automatically and I can access it from any comp, home or work (at lunch of course). I have the free trial of Scrivener so I hope to copy into that tomorrow and see how I like the scene organization but I’m too nervous to type solo in there lest I lose all of it due to unfamiliarity with the program. Anyhoo, so I Ctrl +C and Ctrl+A and paste it right on into the validator, feeling smug for staying on track until it spit out a number that was surely wrong. So I opened Word on this computer and tried again and lo and belond the OneDrive wordcount was off by 396 words!! I have no idea how that is possible. I started watching the counter at the bottom as I typed but was tracking correctly so I don’t know where the problem is. What I do know is if I discovered that on day 30 instead of day 5 I was would have been verrrrrrrrrry upset. At least it’s fixable now.

Wins: busted through today’s word count after fixing the problem and I’m sitting comfortably for now.

Struggles: almost missing my word count. That was a close one.

Your Average Per Day
1,784
Words Written Today
2,122
Total Words Written
8,921
Words Remaining
41,079
Current Day
5
Days Remaining
26
At This Rate You Will Finish On
November 29, 2016
Words Per Day To Finish On Time
1,580

Strange…r Things

Day #4 finally brings the week to a close. I didn’t get to do any writing at lunch today due to an unexpected need to run home from work. We were going to try an escape room but friends weren’t able to go so we went to see Dr. Strange instead. Let me tell you one thing about the movie: amazing. I won’t ruin it for you if you plan to see it but I will suggest that you go in with a basic knowledge of who Dr. Strange is and how he works. Since I’m trying my hand at writing fantasy/magic for the first time, I’ve been doing a lot of ‘research’ by listening to other YA Fantasy audiobooks  and reading books on writing magic leading up to now and I must say, the power throughout the movie had me antsy to leave and get home to my keyboard. So many things clicked in my head as I watched them bend time and matter. So, so good. We saw it in IMAX so I will need to see it again in regular 2D to focus on some of it more I think. There was just so much going on all the time, it was hard to follow it all at once. I thought Benedict Cumberbatch would be a good fit but dannnnng was he a natural. Why else do you think Sherlock is so good, hmm? Magic. I knew it all along!

Now it’s late and the little ones have soccer bright and early so let’s get to the matter at hand.

Wins: I really like a scene with the main character’s father I wasn’t expecting. I have been tossing around an idea and deliberately put in an easter egg but it may be too subtle.

Struggles: I hate the word said. I love writing the actual dialogue but I feel like it’s constantly “she replied” “he said” “she asked”. Didn’t hit the 1,667 mark today but I’m still just over par to finish on time thanks to early days of extra.

Your Average Per Day
1,699
Words Written Today
1,490
Total Words Written
6,799
Words Remaining
43,201
Current Day
4
Days Remaining
27
At This Rate You Will Finish On
November 30, 2016
Words Per Day To Finish On Time
1,601

 

Slow and Steady…Day #2

I tried something new today and switched up the point of few to another character. Frankly, I don’t know how I feel about it just yet but the whole point is to just keep writing, so for now, I’ll keep it. I was able to get a little writing in while I ate lunch and made a plan to get an uninterrupted hour before I had to get home to the kids. Thankfully the weather was GORGEOUS today so I went to Halyburton Park and sat at one of the picnic tables outside. I’m sure people thought I was crazy as I grooved to the Hamilton soundtrack and typed away, taking in all the sunshine. Reluctantly, I went home with about 200 words to go, thinking surely I can finish that no problem and still go to bed early. I was wrong. Let me just say, don’t try to finish even a few paragraphs during Game 7 when the Cubbies have sold their grandmother’s soul to win this game. As a life long Atlanta girl, the drama is so much more fun to watch when you don’t have skin in the game. It’s nice to enjoy a sporting event without feeling like your blood pressure is about to make you have a stroke (I’m looking at you Panthers….) so now here I am, 10:30pm, debating the appropriateness of instant replay in baseball (I’m totally against for those of you keeping score) and I finally finished for the night. Writing environment really is an important consideration.

Wins: being able to write outdoors        img_1492

Struggle: not really being happy with a character choice

Total word count: 3,654